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Série AIR PEGASUS dans l'histoire de NIKE

Posted by ewthbrhga in ewthbrhga's Blog, 21 October 2014 · 9 views

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Bravest Warriors Presents: Catbug’s Treasure Book Review

  Posted by Sakura Eries in Sakura Eries' Blog: Keeping It In Canon …mostly, 21 October 2014 · 11 views

If you’re a fan of the Bravest Warriors animated series, chances are you’re also a fan of the cutest member of its cast, Catbug! Absolutely adorable with his squeaky voice and somewhat ADD personality, he now reveals all his secrets in Bravest Warriors Presents: Catbug’s Treasure Book!

Back Cover Blurb

Four teenage travelers traverse the universe saving those in need…though not always in the way you’d expect…in fact…never! Along the way they meet aliens, phantoms and other interdimensionals—including everyone’s favorite, Catbug. Sometimes…they even meet themselves!

In Catbug’s Treasure Book we see the world from his perspective. A kind of scrapbook, the pages are filled with memories and souvenirs of his adventures with the Bravest Warriors, along with his playtime imaginings. There are also allusions to past episodes (Danny’s eyebrows taped to a page, for example), and hints at secrets not yet revealed.

The Review

If you do not know who Catbug is, can’t identify all four Bravest Warriors, and haven’t the foggiest what an Impossibear is, do yourself a favor, and do NOT buy Catbug’s Treasure Book. At least not until you’ve acquainted yourself with Cartoon Hangover’s Bravest Warriors animated series. Prior to my taking this book off the Fandom Post review pile, my only exposure to Bravest Warriors was seeing my 21-year-old cousin in Catbug cosplay at Fanime 2013, and I can personally attest that giving a Bravest Warriors noob Catbug’s Treasure Book will only result in mass confusion. However, if you are a Catbug fan and enjoy his playful hijinks, silly interjections, and wild imagination, you can get plenty more in his treasure book.

The hardcover design of the book is very similar to a child’s storybook but don’t be fooled. If you’re expecting a single cohesive story with beginning, middle, and end, you won’t get it. Catbug’s Treasure Book is actually a kind of journal, the written record that would result if a highly sophisticated artificial intelligence transcribed all of Catbug’s thoughts. And since Catbug has the intelligence and attention span of a 7-year-old boy chugging Mountain Dew, the content of the book goes all over the place. Then again, it’s the sort of randomness that’s typical for Bravest Warriors.

Most of the book is presented as a dialogue between Catbug and the journal, the Futuristic Electromagnetic and Enigmatic Learning Encyclopedia X, (a.k.a. Feelex). Feelex does have a personality though it does take things a little too literally and seriously. As mentioned earlier, there is no plot per se, but over the course of their conversations, we get a few anecdotes about the Courageous Battlers and Bravest Warriors, the origins of Feelex, and a couple ramblings that go absolutely nowhere. The book is illustrated throughout and includes a few two-page spreads.

As you might guess from the title, Catbug is the star of this book. The four Bravest Warriors are relegated to supporting roles. Interestingly, Impossibear features predominantly and not just in the illustrations and Catbug’s stories. On nearly every page of the journal are “handwritten” comments from Impossibear (ostensibly jotted down when Catbug had him fill in the blanks for some Mad Lib style pages), and for me, Impossibear’s snarky remarks are the most entertaining part of the book.

In summary

Catbug’s Treasure Book contains pictures, anecdotes, and other Bravest Warriors-styled flights of fancy you won’t find anywhere else. However, be warned that it does not contain an overarching plot, and the four Bravest Warriors have relatively minor parts. But if you’re a big Catbug (or Impossibear) fan, this will probably be up your alley.

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Express Yourself: Halloween Costumes

  Posted by DebsBlueRoses in The Writer Ambitious, 21 October 2014 · 16 views


Welcome back to Express Yourself, a bloghop created by Dani @ Entertaining Interests and Jackie @ Bouquet of Books to get to know their followers!

This week, they ask us to name a Halloween costume we wore as a child.

I'm guessing I asked for these costumes myself, and I wish I had pictures of these, but in the 1st Grade, I went as Myrtle Urkel, Steve Urkel's cousin. I wore one of my mom's curly wigs, a pair of her old glasses, and one of my Sunday dresses. Being a big year for Steve, one of my friends was actually Steve, so we walked together in the parade. lol I probably just looked like an old church lady, but eh.

The year after, I was Michelle Pfeiffer's Catwoman. I can't believe they had a tiny version of that thing. lol And of course, one of my friends was Batman, which was interesting, because that was Heather lol.

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Successful Author Talk With Elissa Sussman

  Posted by bigblackcat97 in Writer, Writer Pants on Fire, 21 October 2014 · 26 views

<a href="http://elissa.dreamh...sman_author.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: right; float: right; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-left: 1em;"><img border="0" src="http://elissa.dreamhosters.com/media/Elissa-Sussman_author.jpg" height="320" width="216" /></a>I'm lucky (or cunning) enough to have lured yet another successful writer over to my blog for an SAT- Successful Author Talk. Today's guest is&nbsp;<a href="http://elissasussman.com/" target="_blank">Elissa Sussman</a>. She's a writer, a reader and a pumpkin pie eater. Her debut novel, STRAY (Greenwillow Books/HarperCollins), is a YA fantasy about fairy godmothers, magic and food. She received her BA from Sarah Lawrence College and in a previous life managed animators and organized spreadsheets at some of the best animation studios in the world, including Nickelodeon, &nbsp;Disney, &nbsp;Dreamworks and Sony Imageworks. You can see her name in the credits of THE CROODS, HOTEL TRANSYLVANIA, THE PRINCESS AND THE FROG and TANGLED. She currently lives in Los Angeles with her boyfriend and their rescue mutt, Basil.<br /><br />SAT authors have conquered the query, slain the synopsis and attained the pinnacle of published. How'd they do it? Let's ask 'em!<br /><br /><b>Are you a Planner or Pantster?</b><br /><br /><i>Definitely a planner, though all my outlines and chapter breakdowns usually go out the window once I start writing. Any planning I do is under the illusion that I know what I’m doing, which is never actually the case. </i><br /><br /><b>How long does it typically take you to write a novel, start to finish?</b><br /><br /><i>I’m hoping this won’t be typical, but STRAY took about four years from rough draft to final galleys. Nine years if you count the five years I took to “plan” it. Oy.</i><br /><br /><b>Do you work on one project at a time, or are you a multi tasker?</b><br /><br /><i>So far just one at a time, though I’m planning on exercising my multi tasking muscle in the near future.</i><br /><br /><b>Did you have to overcome any fears that first time you sat down to write?</b><br /><br /><i>I always have about four days where I feel like everything I write is just awful. Powering through that isn’t always easy – especially for a champion procrastinator like myself – but if I can, I usually get into a pretty satisfying groove that can carry me through a draft or batch of rewrites.</i><br /><br /><b>How many trunked books (if any) did you have before you were agented?</b><br /><br /><i>None really. There was an alternate version of STRAY (with dragons!) that I consider a very rough draft since there is a scene or two that still made it into the final manuscript.</i><br /><br /><b>Who is your agent and how did you get that "Yes!" out of them? &nbsp;</b><br /><br /><i>My agent is the fabulous Samantha Shea of Georges Borchardt, Inc. and I grabbed her attention through a traditional query.</i><br /><br /><b>How many queries did you send?&nbsp;</b><br /><br /><i>I sent about 60 queries over five months before getting my first offer.</i><br /><br /><b>Any advice to aspiring writers out there on conquering query hell?</b><br /><br /><i>It’s twofold: don’t give up, but be aware of the response you’re getting. If you’re not getting any bites – re-examine your query. If you’re not getting interest on requested pages – re-examine your pages. Polish your query, polish your pages and keep trying!</i>

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NoQS Michelle's Minions

  Posted by Michelle4Laughs in Michelle4Laughs: It's in the Details, 20 October 2014 · 21 views

It's always tough to limit yourself. It's going to come down to subjective opinion. Often, the entries I picked struck a cord with me. 

So many entries were fantastic, yet not quite right for me. Some might have been darker than I prefer. Some might have been too serious. I'm sad I can only take thirteen.





That is why contests are more for meeting people and learning about writing than just getting before agents.

Hugs to all of you, and I hope no one goes away too disappointed. Everyone is a winner for putting your work out there and facing down the fear of rejection. The greatest fear is not trying. 

You're all honorary Michelle's Minions!

Be sure to check Mike's blog and SC's blog for their picks. 

So it's time to celebrate my official minions! Dance. Congratulate. Be happy for others, knowing they also support you.





In no particular order:


Crossing Brielle
The White Lehua
Life After Redby
Popcorn Brain
Seabound
I'm Not a Zombie But I Play One on TV
Princess Not So Charming
Dead Indeed
The Girlfriend Request
Wired for Wall Street
The Troll Diaries
The Girl Who Was Ordinary, Until She Wasn't
Poison Apples




New minions, keep an eye on your inbox. Mentors will be contacting you through the email you used to enter the contest. If that's not your actual email because a friend mailed yours in, you'd better let me know. Each entry will get one mentor assigned to them.

Please return your revised entry using the same format to the contest email by midnight on October 25th.  We need that time to swat down unruly formatting and create the posts before the agent round. Please do not be late. We will go live without you.

Come back on October 28th to see the agents Shriek, Scream and Shiver! 



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Revealing...the SC SPOOKS for Nightmare on Query Street 2014!!

  Posted by SC_Author in SC Write--Writing, Publishing, and Harry Potter, 20 October 2014 · 23 views

Yes. It is that time.


The SC Spooks, our 13 (scary number!) team for Nightmare on Query Street, is being revealed.

I know you guys will all run down to the list, but I have some things to say.

Actually, I've said it all many times. Over and over. And I'm tired of saying the same thing over and over! You know? So click here, and here, and especially here and here. I can go on, I've written about this a lot! If you still don't believe in the subjective nature of contest picking, if you still don't believe that my 'picking' is not at all as big of a reflection of quality as you might think, then I really can't do much else. I've told you the truth. You can lead a horse to water....

ANYWAY.

Picking was hard. Very hard. But I think we've got an amazing team. 

SO, INTRODUCING THE SPOOKS!

Timber Point
Erasing Ramona
The Battle Born
Thicker than Water
Jacked
Eighteen Years Later
When You Don't Know Me
Finding Beauty
Down for the Count
A Ghoulish Affair
Winter on Brimstone Hill
I Wish I Had a...Dang You Autocorrect!
And my Free Pass, Beyond the Wild

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WAAUGEHOISDJFALSKDJFOASKD I'M SO EXCITED!

We are going the destroy Michelle's Minions and Mike's Monsters. I mean, both of them start with M and that's boring. We're the SC Spooks (#SCSpooks). And we are going to DOMINATE.

Mentors, regardless of what I sent you in your mail - you can contact your mentee now! We unveiled our picks a bit early :)

There has been conflicting information (probably my fault!) so the below is the correct info on what's happening, mentor-wise. 

Writers should be getting emails from your mentors within the day. Contact me if, by Wednesday, you don't get them. You will be working with your mentor in private, over email, not on the blog. Please PLEASE keep one thing in mind: I picked many of you guys based on the potential of improvement. Meaning, if the entries you sent in were the final versions, I might not have picked you. So don't take your position on the team to mean you shouldn't listen to mentor advice! Please, take into account what they say. They are smart, talented, and knowledgeable. If something they say doesn't settle well with you, feel free to disregard that advice if you honestly believe it is not helpful. Just trust your gut. And don't bombard your mentors with emails! They are professionals too :)

Mentors, be tough, be brutal, but only in letting the writer's essence come through.

Revised entries must be sent by the writer by midnight of the 25th, EST!

GOOD LUCK EVERYONE! GO SPOOKS!


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THE PL Newsletter VII

  Posted by Professor VJ Duke in The Punchy Lands!, 20 October 2014 · 13 views

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Punchy Proverbs

I. It’s fun in the dark; that’s where the fireflies are. ~ Smiles Riot

II. You haven’t made your bed until you lay in it. ~ John W. Howell

III. Walk to get your water—it stays fresher that way. ~ Merlin

Have an original proverb? Comment below and Shnodgrate might include in next week’s issue!

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Breaking News
by J. Freedwoppen

A new type of wine has been shipped into France for Napoleon to try. Some say Schwarz Tauptinker made it.

Which is warmer: a beaver fur or a mink fur? This discussion took place in Daddy Salami’s hut, not too long ago.

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Punchy Conversations

DR. ZAUBERER: I’m an indian.PConversations
BUD PARKER: Really, Bud?
DR. ZAUBERER: Oh, yes, an indian who practices dastardly schemes on non-suspecting civilians.
BUD PARKER: Sounds like the majority of people out there. See, Bud? Not so special after all.

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Punchy Connections

Connect with the professor on Twitter: https://twitter.com/ProfessorVJDuke
Friend the professor on Facebook: http://goo.gl/TYB2Jw
Subscribe to MicP Studios: http://goo.gl/Kn0Rcf

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Punchy Poetry
by Dick Hercules (agented by Walt Walker)

Walt says, “Professor, I bumped into Mr. Hercules at a pancake house this morning. We had speaks, and throughout them and throughin [a great word] them he was scribbling on the back of his napkin. When he got up to go, I discovered this verse he’d left behind.”

This cup of coffee
Which I call Nigel
Is so black that
When I ask him
How much more black
Could you be?
He whispers, “None.”
None more black?
Nigel nods wisely,
And takes a sip
Of Walt’s cup,
Janine.

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Punchy Questions?

Have any questions about the Punchy Lands? From ‘What is it?’ to in-depth Punchy questions? Contact the professor here: micpencilpoint@gmail.com. (He uses Mic’s email, because he wishes to remain an enigma.)

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PWoftheweekPunchy Word of the Week

“Criblet”

And it is an interest, you know.

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Amy Ruttan & Signing with an Agent

  Posted by Jemi in Just Jemi, 20 October 2014 · 30 views

(If you're looking for a post about the fabulous Lenny Lee, scroll down to the one below this one (or click here) ... after you've visited with Amy that is!!)

Please welcome Amy Ruttan to the blog today!

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Why an agent was right for me.

First off I want to thank  Jemi Fraser for having me here today!

One of the most frequent questions I’ve been getting lately is why I decided to sign with an agent.
Before Harlequin, I published via eBook publishers. There was no need for an agent and then when I sold to Harlequin, I did that on my own without an agent.

In May 2014 I decided to pursue an agent. One I admired and had been following for some time. He knows Harlequin, he’s professional and I admire several of the authors he represents.

So again, why did I query him? I don’t technically need an agent for Harlequin. I had signed two contracts with Harlequin without an agent, but when I made the decision in May to query my agent it’s because I wanted my career path to go further.

I love Harlequin and I love writing for Medicals, but I have a specific career path in my head that I want to take. I still plan on writing for Medicals as long as they’ll have me, but I wanted more and the path I wanted to take …well I wanted an agent to help me down that path.

Signing with my agent was not a spur of the moment thing. I researched for a long time to see who might be the right fit. I say right fit because honestly you don’t know until you talk to them over the phone or meet them face-to-face.

I queried him and he requested partials from me, which he read and then we talked on the phone. He wanted to make sure that this is what I wanted from my writing career and he wanted to make sure we were on the same page. We were!

Publishing is a constantly moving and changing beast. I wanted someone to advocate for me, someone to help navigate me on the right path for my career and the brand I’ve been building for myself and I wanted an agent who loved my work.

I think an agent who believes in your work and really gets your voice will advocate the best for you.

And that’s basically why I signed with my agent. It really depends on you. Think about why you want to sign with an agent, because an agent can’t guarantee you sales, but they do open doors to some house who only take agented submissions.

Make sure you don’t sign with just any agent. Make sure you and your potential agent work well together and that the agent is reputable meaning that they’re a part of the AAR’s or follow their code of ethics (they don’t charge you for reading fees).

And an agent who is right for author A may not be right for author B. Make the decision and do the research yourself. Don’t let anyone else decide for you.


It all depends on the choices you want to make in your writing career, because each writer has a different road to walk. Not all paths are the same.


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Born and raised in Toronto, Ontario, Amy fled the big city to settle down with the country boy of her dreams. When she's not furiously typing away at her computer, she's a mom to three children.
Life got in the way, and after the birth of her second child, she decided to pursue her dream of becoming a romance author.

Find her here:
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DARE SHE DATE AGAIN?
To love again…? 

Single mom and paramedic Samantha Doxtator has been living with a broken heart after losing her husband years ago. Now she's finally back on track and following her dream to become an air ambulance pilot…after training one last student—George Atavik!

Since nearly losing his life in a plane crash, George will not waste the second chance he's been given, and he won't deny the sparks flying between him and his new mentor. Does Samantha dare risk her own carefully guarded heart for another opportunity at happiness?

Read an Excerpt

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 Thanks so much, Amy! I love how you really researched and planned out your writing path. A great example for the rest of us! 
How about you, are you good at planning out your path?


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Lakers Reversed Jazz, Kobe Bryant 26 Points for Coming Back

Posted by oolorres in oolorres' Blog, 20 October 2014 · 32 views

Lakers Reversed Jazz, Kobe Bryant 26 Points for Coming Back Oct. 20 NBA preseason, the Lakers vs. Jazz, results in 98-91 reversal opponent, ending three-game losing streak. The Lakers trailed by 22 points in the second quarter, but Bryant led the team to 31-5 wave of attacks hit the go-ahead score, and ultimately difficult to win. Bryant shot 7 of 22 contribute 26 points, five assists and four rebounds, Jeremy Lin (microblogging) and Nash injury continued truce.

Game review: Jazz end the Lakers with 22 points reversed three-game losing streak

Opening, Bryant feel bad, before three shots were wide of the basket, but the Lakers rely Price and Hill scored, the first gain an advantage. Since then, the Jazz back attack feeling, Hayward pointers and free throws to help the team go-ahead score. Bryant promptly force, consecutive field goal, the Lakers biting score. But before the end of the first, Bryant end, the Jazz took the opportunity to play a 10-5 wave of attacks, will expand the advantage to double digits, a single to lead the Lakers 32-20.

Second section, the Lakers lineup rotation poor performance, was jazz played 11-2 offensive. See the team behind as many as 21 points, Kobe Bryant can go it alone, he forced two consecutive third shot hit, three-point play and later succeeded in his marker. Under section 9 points Bryant single stimulus, the Lakers finally play some improvement, Boozer storm and free throws. Before the end of this section, the Lakers answered with a 8-2 offensive half to 38-54 behind the Jazz.

Ex situ battles, Jazz let Hayward, Favors two main early break, the Lakers continued the second last paragraph of section excellent condition. Bryant free throws, three and CIC quickly scored six points, Carlos Boozer and Johnson, who also lend a helping hand. Only 6 minutes, the Lakers finished 23-3 offensive surge, in one fell swoop to 61-57 go-ahead score. Since then, the Jazz finally found the feeling, the use of long shot and breakthroughs up points, to stabilize the situation. Three kick, jazz advantage almost gone, only the Lakers leading 72-69.

Distal, the Lakers up is a 7-0 attack wave, again ahead score. Since then, both teams refused to give the Jazz hit two three-pointers, the Lakers will rely on rookie Randall cut points, his scoring range jumper in the rapidly contributed 8 points. Call of Duty, Bryant played again, and assists Davis layup after Ellington hit third, the Lakers lead six minutes. Since then, the Jazz offense sluggish, Bryant made ​​two free throws to seal the victory. The Lakers defeated after three consecutive games, finally ushered in returning to the victory.

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Zoe Kravitz rocks out wearing skimpy black hotpants on stage at intimate Sydney gig

Posted by pennydress in pennydress' Blog, 18 October 2014 · 61 views
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As an actress and singer Zoe Kravitz has mingled with an array of stars on the job, including Jennifer Lawrence and Will Smith.

But it looks like there's one A-lister the 25-year-old has her heart set on meeting, after revealing her desire to be introduced to British pop star Lily Allen.

The daughter of Lenny Kravitz has a lot in common with the songstress, after proving her own musical talent during a performance with her band Lolawolf at the Oxford Art Factory in Sydney, Australia on Friday.


During an interview with The Daily Telegraph on Saturday Zoe revealed how her band scored the opening slot on Miley Cyrus' Bangerz tour Down Under.

Bizarrely, the gig didn't come from the screen stars desire to work with the 21-year-old Wrecking Ball singer.


She instead had intentions of working with another controversial songstress, telling the publication: 'I asked Miley if she could put us in touch with Lily Allen because we wanted to get on her tour.'

Twenty-nine-year-old Lily supported the former Disney poster child on her US leg of the Bangerz tour earlier this year.

The request turned into a job offer after Miley said 'she would do it' but wanted Lolawolf to open for her in Oz as a trade off.

Zoe accepted the offer and is currently in Australia for the action packed concerts, which of course involve twerking.

It looks like the deal paid off with Lolawolf performing alongside Lily earlier this month in Portland, America.


Clearly excited by the experience, the bands front woman took to Instagram to share a shot of her cuddling up to the Smile singer two weeks ago.

She took to the social media app again on Sunday to upload a polaroid image of the pair, writing: '@lilyallen, miss you already!'

On Friday Zoe took to the stage at Miley's Sydney concert at Allphones Arena with Lolawolf, which also consists of James Levy and Jimmy Giaonnopoulus.

After that gig the trio headed to the Oxford Art Factory where Zoe showed off her dance moves in a white T-shirt and black short shorts.

The intimate crowd responded well, cheering on the American-born star as she swayed from side to side.


Zoe is the daughter of Grammy Award winning artist Lenny Kravitz and actress Lisa Bonet, who separated in 1993.

Over the years the rising star has proved she's not just another pretty face by scoring various roles in big budget movies.

She starred in the 2011 film X-Men: First Class as mutant Angel alongside Jennifer Lawrence.

Extending her already lengthy resume, Zoe then appeared in M. Night Shyamalan's After Earth with Will Smith and 2014 action fiction flick Divergent.

She's set to appear in the sequel Insurgent as well as Mad Max: Fury Road in 2015.


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QUITE THE QUERY with Mary Elizabeth Summer and TRUST ME, I’M LYING

  Posted by Amy Trueblood in Chasing The Crazies , 17 October 2014 · 75 views

    If you ask any writer about the process of connecting with their agent (or publisher), the majority will say the most difficult part was querying. Not only the actual process of sending out the letters/emails, but formulating the query itself. In fact, I’ve heard more than a few writers say writing their query […]

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Exactly about Sports Gambling Traces

Posted by haiiroe in haiiroe's Blog, 16 October 2014 · 49 views

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Concept: Why my novel probably won't get published

Posted by Selene Bell in Confessions of a Binge Reader, 15 October 2014 · 69 views

When writers are writing—our early manuscripts at least—I think we have this voice in our head that says, “People are going to go mad over this book! Agents and editors will fight to get it! And it’s going to be a best-seller and inspire nightmares and create world peace!” Then you write a query and send it out, and the rejections roll in. And by you, I mean me, of course. It makes me scratch my head. Lots of people who read my book really like it, and I’m not talking only friends and family. But what agents say is: “Wren has a great voice, but… ” “If you rewrite to make it not a monster story, we’d love to take another look.” “This is really good but the genre’s not selling.” “Send me your next work please.”

And for real, I love this MS. It’s trumps like sliced cinnamon bread, you know? But I also kind of want to put it on a ship, set it on fire and shove it far, far away. So I don’t have to deal with the fact that these 63,000 words I crafted are likely not going to find a home outside my hard drive. People aren’t going to get to read Wren and struggle with her and figure out her world. And I feel bad for them—and bad for me.

And it’s worse because when you (I) start getting out in the writing community and reading what other people have, I see how parts of my story don’t stand out. I see how if you turn it to a 145-degree angle, wrench it in half and scrub off the skin, people can get vampire redux—even though I NEVER conceived of that as I created. (And even though there’s no blood or traditional vampire anything.) I thought I had something unique, but maybe what I really have is a mythology that’s shades of different but not really different enough. That’s hard to recognize and ridiculously difficult to own up to.

So what I want to talk about today is concept. Specifically the kind of concept that goes in the hook of a query. And not just the hook that’s a catchy intro to your book, but a hook that tells agents why your book isn’t what they’ve seen before. Concept, the kind with a capital C.


Why concept is important
My query has gone through several iterations. The first version I thought was good enough to send out started like this: “Seventeen-year-old foster kid Wren Buttles has to decide if it’s better to live as a fiend or die as a human.”

So okay, interesting enough on its own, but how many queries are sent out every year that say the same thing? Not exactly the same thing, mind you, but essentially pose the same dilemma. If you spend time on websites like Agent Query Connect, where aspiring authors post their queries for feedback, you start to see themes. For an even starker look at how many books people are pitching in your (my) genre take a spin through a #pitmad contest on Twitter. (They’re generally held quarterly.)

Participating in that real pitch madness was an eye-opening experience. If I was feeling motivated, I’d comb through the last go-round and count up the percentage of YA paranormal. (But it’s not one of those kinds of days.) Suffice to say, the majority. YA of all kinds, the VAST majority. The pitches that stand out are not the best YA paranormal. No matter how well executed, it’s hard to poke your head up above the flood.

By the time I did #pitmad, I had already gotten enough rejections to know my query needed a new angle. The new hook I went with: “Lots of leading ladies swoon for an alpha male who’s dangerous and sexy, especially when he covets her and he’s more than human. But in my YA novel LITTLE BIRD, BROKEN MONSTER, the girl doesn’t fall in love back.” That’s Concept, and I got multiple requests from agents to see the full manuscript.

And then I got rejections of those fulls—many very nicely stated. There’s just no getting around the fact that this book—no matter how many interesting elements or Wren and her cool voice or the sympathetic evil monster girl or the plot twists and nuanced side characters or the unique story structure, ahem, shutting up now—this book is still a YA paranormal in a saturated market. And for an agent who’s looking to sign the very best thing she sees this year, my book is not going to be it. Because even though I can say it has “Concept”—I might be able to come up with more than one Concept because it’s a multi-layered story—it’s still a classic teenage horror story built around monsters.

On one hand, people say there are no new story ideas. On the other, I say that’s bullshit. People come up with new stuff all the time, especially in YA, and you know it as well as I do because you know their names. J.K. Rowling. Suzanne Collins. Veronica Roth. Holly Black. Stephen King’s done it a bunch of times. You (I) don’t have to be them, but I do have to aim for something more with my next story. Something that makes that hook practically irresistible. Because sometimes it’s not enough to write a good character with honest emotions and an interesting story arc.

How to find a unique concept
It takes work, and it’s very likely not your first idea.

First, do research to see what’s out there.
• Surf query-feedback websites to learn what people are writing. Agent Query Connect isn’t the only one, but as it’s awesome and the people are typically respectful, smart and fun, I’ve never looked beyond it.
• Pitch contests on Twitter show you what people with completed manuscripts wrote about. The contests include PitMad and QueryKombat.
• Check out Publisher’s Weekly, which lists books that editors have purchased for future release. It also reviews upcoming or new releases. I plan to subscribe as soon as I can spare $50.
• Look at best-seller and new-releases lists to see what’s happening in your genre—but know, if those books are from traditional publishing houses, those are the manuscripts that sold about two years ago. (That $50 for PW isn’t sounding so bad now, huh?)

But keep in mind that you’re not looking to get inspired by other people’s ideas via this research. This is so you know what not to write, especially which tropes to avoid. As you become more and more familiar with this, you’ll start to be able to pick out the stories that have promise, and the ones that will catch an agent’s eye. Think of it as studying a slush pile.

Second, brainstorm—a lot. What ideas move you? What kinds of characters fascinate you? The breadth of potential plots mean you can fall in love with a character idea and still find a way to apply that to something you didn’t see in step No. 1. For example, capital punishment is an issue I feel strongly about. So if that’s the large idea I’m considering, my next question is how do I funnel that broad concept down to a single story idea that:

a.) means something
b.) makes me excited to write it
c.) has a plot that hasn’t been in a book or movie already
d.) changes the main character’s life.

Maybe I answer all these questions and find this isn’t the topic for me, in which case I start over. This will take time. It should take time. I’ll be honest, many of the books I've written were the result of an idea lightning-bolting me at some random time. Sometimes I went home and started writing right then, spending months working this single idea that came to me in one second and finishing with something that wouldn't stand out. You can see the imbalance. If you’re going to dedicate your precious time and brain power to a whole book, make sure the concept is worth all that effort. Maybe you get lucky and your lightning-struck concept rocks. I’ve heard that Suzanne Collins was watching TV, switching between a history-of-war show and a reality-TV kid pageant show or something when she got the idea for The Hunger Games. That’s awesome. That’s also not how things work for me.

Third, I say write some sample queries. For you pantsters, this doesn’t mean you have to decide the entire plot before you begin. What it will do is help you try out different angles to see what’s striking and attention catching, and what starts to sound like some of those other queries you read in step No. 1.

But it all boils down to love
I had a lot of fun writing my novel, and I’m ridiculously proud of it, even if it never sells. (I still think book-buyers would gobble it up, and maybe I’ll try to sell it again when the publishing world has circled back to the genre.) But I know I can be just as proud and just as intensely satisfied by my next novel. That's what writing is to me. I write because I need to create characters and craft stories, and each novel I invent has to be something that fires my imagination and excitement. I don't want to create and slave over a story I'm not in love with, and I wouldn't write one solely because I thought it would sell. But I'll tell you what, it's a whole lot nicer when you finish something that you think rocks and everyone else thinks it does, too.

Each of the manuscripts I’ve written has been a huge step up from the previous one, and I'm sure that's true for you as well. So I know my next (and your next) will be even better than Little Bird, Broken Monster (insert the title of your last work here). But you can bet my new one has a “Concept” no one's read before. Now I just have to get it done before someone else thinks of it…

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Cover image completed for Box of Rain

  Posted by Deb Borys in Debra R. Borys, 14 October 2014 · 35 views

We just completed the image to go on the front of the ebook and print versions of Box of Rain. I love it! Artwork by the wonderful Annie Walls. Ebook should be preorderable later this month and available for purchase … Continue reading

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Why Do You Write?

Posted by JordanTheNinja in JordanTheNinja's Blog, 14 October 2014 · 62 views

Motivation. It’s the driving force behind most of our actions. The desire to achieve something, to create something that’s ours that we can be proud of. I believe I started a topic with a similar title – Why do you write? Is it because there’s a story in your head you just cannot wait to write down? Is it because you need to pay the bills (although I’m told to seek other ventures of income; being a full time novelist is shaky when it comes to the areas of payment)? Is it because you have nothing else better to do?

As writers, we’re all unique. No one writer is the same, and therefore no one story is (mostly) the same. The beautiful thing about this is that we can express ourselves—our ideas, our emotions, our personality—through our writing. Since I know for a fact I’ll always be a writer, regardless of whether or not I hit it big and become a bestseller, I can at least have a solid reasoning for why I put myself through the madness of late night editing sessions, emotional fits of crying and manic laughter, and a plethora of things as I try to create this world and these characters to be as real to readers as they are to me.

So, I shall bring up the question yet again to all my fellow writers: why do you write? What is the motivating factor behind this madness? What gives you pleasure from putting yourself through the ups and downs and pain (now I’m making it sound like we’re sadist—oh boy) that come with being a writer?

For me, it’s wanting to be able to make the reader feel all the emotions those talented authors make me feel whenever I read them. Being able to pen characters and have themes that are inspirational to the people who read what I write. Being able to show that you can accomplish anything (even publishing a book) if you’re willing to put in the effort and have the determination. It’s my goal to inspire others through my writing. If I can do that, then I’ll be happy.

Now, back to you.

Why do you write?

-Jordan

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OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS Query Critique

Posted by jadah in The Query Faerie, 13 October 2014 · 48 views

OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS Query Critique


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A Tale of, Er, Um, Mermaids and Centaurs?


Hey, hey, Lords and Ladies of the written word! Happy Monday to ye all. It’s been a while since I’ve done a query critique, and I have to say I am out of practice! Nothing better than taking a break from Doctor Who on a lazy, rainy Monday night to fire up the ole lasers.

I would like to make one announcement before we get down to business, if you’ll pardon the interruption. I’d just like to say that my short story, Letters to Jennifer, was published in this month’s edition of Blue Lake Review. It was inspired by a family member’s death this past summer, and it’s only 1,500 words, so I’d love if you took a moment to read it! You can find it at bluelakereview.weebly.com.

Anyway, enough of that!

Without further ado, off we go to Query Faerie land:

Original:

Dear Agent:

They were gods once. Gifted with magic and long life, thousands of Sapiens walked our world. But that which was, no longer is. And that which now is has only come to be because of their downfall.

I am Alexys Elizabeth Rothschild. Five ancient codices scribed in three lost languages, I was the key to unlocking their secrets. The translated result of my efforts is OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS.

Another world existed before the one you now know, but we humans in our native, virgin skin have been too blind to find it. We are so clever in so many ways, yet are clueless as to the true nature of our ‘myths’. Nearly everyone knows of grand creatures such as mystic Sapiens, Centaurs, Arachna Majora, Mermaids, and Gryphons, but know nothing of how they came to be, the lives they lived, their heroes and heroines, villains and villainesses, some obvious, most not, who ensured that each misstep of the East down a perilous staircase carved by the West brought Terra Australis ever closer to war.

A Mermaid Queen and Gryphon King seeking to dominate all, a Witch Queen hoping to break free the ‘mythical’ gem that is the Soul of Terra Australis from its haunted prison, and with it, unleash the ancient prophecy to transform all, a Centaur Chiron and Arachna King doing their best to withstand all; amidst this subtle chaos, a Centaur polymath named Adamarcus fights to keep the malice festering deep inside his forbidden love, Evagoria – young daughter of Queen Diedrika and the ‘Gift from Poseidon’ – from beating everyone to the punch and destroying all.

Script and hieroglyphs upon copper plates deciphered, a select few of us deserving enough to hear them gathered; I stand ready to tell the tale. Terra Australis at its peak – our story will begin but twenty years from its end. Will it begin without you? A simple, sweeping choice is now yours to make: Hurry with great haste to West Antarctica and embark on a great discovery or keep firm your blissful ignorance.

A completed historical fantasy at 297,000 words, OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS is a departure from most fantasy works. Similar to the movie TITANIC, the novel uses a present day timeline to set up the historical one. In addition, it introduces major characters with a variety of ethnicities such as Nubian, Huaxia, and Olmec. OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS is gender balanced and contains as many female as male characters.

Cordialement,

Dr. Alexys Elizabeth Rothschild
P.S. Please direct all correspondence to my liaison in the States, REDACTED


My critiques:

Dear Agent:

They were gods once. Gifted with magic and long life, thousands of Sapiens walked our world. But that which was, no longer is. And that which now is has only come to be because of their downfall.

Right away this is very vague. You’ll need a stronger hook to draw an agent in. This opener leads to a lot of questions, and not necessarily the good kind. Who were gods? What was? What is now? What downfall? This paragraph confuses more than it intrigues. You’re better off starting with specifics, such as the main character and introducing us to the conflict right away.

I am Alexys Elizabeth Rothschild. Five ancient codices scribed in three lost languages, I was the key to unlocking their secrets. The translated result of my efforts is OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS.

So, is Alexys the main character? First person queries can be done, but this doesn’t work for me. The main character talking to the reader feels a bit gimmicky. Also, this paragraph leads to more questions. Ancient codices? What secrets? Why is she the key? If OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS is what she’s transcribed, is this a book within a book? Bookception?

Another world existed before the one you now know, but we humans in our native, virgin skin have been too blind to find it. What purpose does this sentence serve? Does it introduce any plot to the reader? I’m keen to say that it doesn’t. Let me keep reading. We are so clever in so many ways, yet are clueless as to the true nature of our ‘myths’. Nearly everyone knows of grand creatures such as mystic Sapiens, Centaurs, Arachna Majora, Mermaids, and Gryphons, but know nothing of how they came to be, the lives they lived, their heroes and heroines, villains and villainesses, some obvious, most not, who ensured that each misstep of the East down a perilous staircase carved by the West brought Terra Australis ever closer to war.

Okay, now that I’ve read it I can say that whole entire paragraph is fluff. It’s unnecessary. It can be cut and I won’t miss it, and good thing too, because this query is heavy by about 100-150 words. That paragraph is cumbersome to read, and almost ambling. As in, if you read it to yourself, does it tell us anything about the plot? You used 100+ words to tell us mankind is clueless and name off a few races.

A Mermaid Queen and Gryphon King seeking to dominate all, a Witch Queen hoping to break free the ‘mythical’ gem that is the Soul of Terra Australis from its haunted prison, and with it, unleash the ancient prophecy to transform all, a Centaur Chiron and Arachna King doing their best to withstand all; amidst this subtle chaos, a Centaur polymath named Adamarcus fights to keep the malice festering deep inside his forbidden love, Evagoria – young daughter of Queen Diedrika and the ‘Gift from Poseidon’ – from beating everyone to the punch and destroying all.

This is information overload. I forgot it as soon as I read it. It’s a general rule to mention no more than three characters to avoid turning a query into character soup. It seems like you’re naming off all the characters of the book…without even giving them names. Who are these people? How will I know which ones are the MOST important? There is a hint of plot in this paragraph: a witch queen breaking free a gem from a haunted prison. But for what? What’s the plot here?

Script and hieroglyphs upon copper plates deciphered, a select few of us deserving enough to hear them gathered; I stand ready to tell the tale. Terra Australis at its peak – our story will begin but twenty years from its end. Will it begin without you? A simple, sweeping choice is now yours to make: Hurry with great haste to West Antarctica and embark on a great discovery or keep firm your blissful ignorance.

Please cut that entire paragraph. It doesn’t make any sense to me and adds nothing to the query.

A completed Is this adult, YA, MG, etc? historical fantasy at 297,000 Holy Jesus. You do realize that’s three long novels, right? And by reading the query, I’d imagine a good one third of it could be pared away. words, OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS is a departure from most fantasy works. Similar to the movie TITANIC, It’s not really typical or advised to use a movie as a comparison for a novel. the novel uses a present day timeline to set up the historical one. In addition, it introduces major characters with a variety of ethnicities such as Nubian, Huaxia, and Olmec. OF MERMAIDS AND CENTAURS is gender balanced and contains as many female as male characters. Pointing out the balance of ethnicities and ratio of men to women character seems like a really strange thing to showcase. They’re interested in the merit of the plot and writing, not the balance of men to women.

Cordialement,

Dr. Alexys Elizabeth Rothschild
P.S. Please direct all correspondence to my liaison in the States, REDACTED

By your closing I can now tell that you’ve written the entire query in the first person POV of your main character. I encourage you not to do this. In some cases it does work, but not this case. This reads as gimmicky.

I’ve read approximately 400 words and I have no idea where the plot is in these 300,000 words. Let me take a moment to comment on the word count. Novels with high word counts like this need to be spectacular, especially for a breakout novel. I’ll tell you why. More words means more ink and paper. More ink and paper means it costs more money to print the novel. Being published is already an exception to the rule. Don’t try to make yourself an exception to the exception to the rule.

I’d say you’re better off starting over and telling me 1) Who the main character is 2) What the main character wants 3) What stands in the MC’s way 4) What must the MC do to overcome that obstacle, and 5) What are the stakes for the MC if they cannot overcome it? This last one is very important. Why should I care about this person? Why should I read THEIR story when there are millions of other stories I could read?

From reading the query it seems like the story may focus around several story arcs, several characters. Pick a similar BOOK to use as a comparison.

Hope this has helped, and feel free to contact me with any questions.


Love,
The Query Faerie

P.S. Damn folks, I still got it! ;)

Thanks for reading!

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Tribute to My Father

  Posted by LucidDreamer in LucidDreamer's Blog, 13 October 2014 · 38 views

I haven’t been posting much — life has gotten in the way and made me focus on some things rather more essential than blogging. The truth is, my dad passed away on Sept. 29th. This was not unexpected, as his health had been declining over the last few years, and he had been moved to […]

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5 Tips for Fleshing it Out

  Posted by From The Write Angle in From The Write Angle Blog, 13 October 2014 · 33 views

by Jemi Fraser

Last month, my post talked about 5 Tips to Trim Your Writing. This month, I'm tackling the opposite. With my current rewrite, I attempted to plot (kaboom!) and ended up with a shorter story than I expected (15k shorter).

So, now I'm focusing on how to flesh out a story without padding it. Some of the things I've discovered:

Fleshing it Out Tip #1 -- Emotions

This one I'm having a blast with. I write contemporary romance, so it's all about the emotion, but I think that's true for most stories. It's the emotions that pull me in and make me gobble up those pages, no matter what the genre is.

Delving into the character's emotions helps the reader connect and makes the writing much more interesting. For me, plot is obviously important, but it's how the characters respond to the plot that intrigues me. So, show that!

Fleshing it Out Tip #2 -- Show, Don't Tell

Another fun one, and very connected to #1. Telling removes the emotion. Wasn't it Mark Twain who said, "Don't tell me the old lady screamed, bring her on stage and let her scream"? Looking for those telling words/sentences in the draft helps me find places I can strengthen my story and make it longer/more compelling at the same time.

Fleshing it Out Tip #3 -- Dialogue

Connected to #2! I love dialogue and tend to include a lot of it in my writing naturally, but there are still places I find where I can have my characters really showing...by telling. Dialogue infuses the story with life and lets the readers hear your characters talking. It also gives the reader a visual--and mental--break from narration, thus increasing the pace of your story.

Fleshing it Out Tip #4 -- Description

Blech. I'm not an especially visual person or writer. My descriptions tend to be focused around the emotions of the characters. And I'm not a fan of reading paragraphs of description either, so I tread very, very carefully when I do this.

For people, I sprinkle in the description. A mention of hair colour by another character here, a comment about height there. Nothing obvious, certainly no looking in the mirror and offering up a self-evaluation. For example, rather than saying my character is short, I'll have her drag a chair over to reach something off a high shelf.

For places, I don't mind stringing a sentence or two together to anchor the reader in the setting, especially when it's a new place. I try to focus on what the character would notice, and only on what is relevant to the story.

I'd rather leave most description up to my readers, but I'm learning I need to include those anchors and let the readers fill in the rest.

Fleshing it Out Tip #5 -- Character Arcs

This one is more complex than the first four. Here, I'm looking for the pace of how my characters are growing. I want them to slowly learn to change, have strategically placed AHA! moments, and obstacles tossed in their paths to have them second guessing their realizations. This is another instance where I find Scrivener invaluable. I can colour code, or use the side bar, or make another file to put side by side in order to track the arcs. Then I can spot where the arc needs some help, tweak a scene here, add a scene there, throw in another obstacle, or three.

There are many more ways to flesh out a story (adding in a subplot and looking for plot holes to fill in come to mind), but these are the 5 I'm working with. Any tips to add? Do you like fleshing it out or do you prefer to trim?

Jemi Fraser is an aspiring author of contemporary romance. She blogs  and tweets while searching for those HEAs.




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Lessons from George Bailey

  Posted by Joe Stephens in My Train of Thought, 12 October 2014 · 32 views


One of my favorite movies of all time is It's a Wonderful Life. I love it for a lot of reasons, including that it stars Jimmy Stewart, one of the great treasures of Hollywood. Additionally, the message of true riches not being found in a bank account is such a beautiful theme that, I must admit, was lost on me for a long time.


There's a pivotal scene in which Jimmy Stewart's George Bailey and Mary Hatch (eventually Mary Bailey), played by Donna Reed in the best role of her career, are going home from a dance in which everyone falls in the pool when the dance floor atop it is opened. They're dressed ridiculously in whatever dry clothes they could find and singing, loudly and off key. At one point, things get quite serious and it seems like he's going to kiss her for the first time, but he falters. From a nearby porch, an old man who's been watching the scene in silence asks if he's ever going to kiss her instead of talking her to death. George says, "You want me to kiss her, huh?" The old man's reply is perfection: "Awww, youth is wasted on the wrong people!"

I've always adored that line, even when I was young and didn't fully understand why it was so apt. Now that I'm getting older, it makes more sense than it ever did before. I realize now that there's a major irony of life when it comes to what we want when we're young and what we want when we get older.

When I was younger, I wanted so much. New cars, a big house, a camper, vacations, a boat--so many toys! But I had no money. This was partly because I spent too much on little things that didn't matter, like going out to eat instead of cooking at home, and new computers and new cars that I really couldn't afford, although they weren't the new cars I really wanted. But it was also partly because I just didn't make as much money as I do now that I've been at my job a long time and have come close to maximizing my earning potential in my chosen field.

So now I'm still not rich, but I make so much more money than I did when I was younger. I'm nearly debt free, soon to be completely debt free if I'm careful, so I could probably soon afford some of those toys I so longed for when I was young. Now comes the ironic part: I don't really care about them anymore. A new car? Ellie, my aging beauty, is fine with me. We know each other. Boats? Campers? Lots of time and effort for too little enjoyment. A big house? Big bills, big time cleaning and maintaining. No thanks.

What do I want? Mostly things that don't cost much. God, friends, family, good health, love, and laughter. I want to be comfortable, but a cozy little house or even a small apartment would meet my needs. A quiet place to read, pray, write, cook (now that I could probably afford to eat out a little more, I love nothing more than to cook a nice pot of chili and eat at home), and spend time with people I love is plenty for me.

Sure, vacations are still nice, but the parts I love about them are the times spent with family and friends, not the exotic destination. Though I will admit that I am never more content than when looking out at the ocean, I can't imagine I would feel the same if I didn't have loved ones with me there to enjoy it.

This Christmas when It's a Wonderful Life comes on, I'll watch it again, like I do every year. And I'll love every minute of it--even the part where the daft Uncle Billy loses the money. But when that old man makes his declaration, his words will make more sense to me than ever before.

In case you want to see it, here's the scene in question:




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Surreal For-real

  Posted by mlebleek in Bleeker Street, 05 October 2014 · 34 views

The day before I left for vacation with my family to Disney World I received an email from my editor with my copy-edits, due two days after the end of our vacation. This meant I either got to mush all my edits into two days (there were almost 3,000 edits soooo that wasn’t going to happen) or I needed to find time to work on the copy-edits at night and early in the morning DURING vacation while the kids were sleeping. No biggie. I actually enjoyed the quiet time every night and morning, rereading WRECKAGE for what I calculated was the 27th time.

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Then, one night as I typed along in my hotel room, kids snoring on either side of me, as I stumbled upon a fun surprise. WRECKAGE on Amazon. It’s already available for pre-order! WHAT?

I shared the news on my Facebook page and Twitter and over the past week my friends, family and even some new readers have taken the plunge to pre-order. And that, my friends, is when it got real. All this work, all the time and effort into writing the story, revising, editing, querying, submitting, editing again and again and now, in a few short months, people are going to read this thing!

Soon after returning from my trip I was introduced to my Lake Union author team. They’ll be helping me through the next phase in the publishing process. My wonderful author’s relations manager already emailed me about personalizing my Amazon author page and filling out a questionnaire for the audiobook. Wait, let me say that again *clears throat*. The AUDIOBOOK. Ah! See what I mean?

I know there will be a lot more of these times ahead of me. They make me nervous and excited at the same time. There is still work to be done on this book and plenty of books still to be written but I’ve decided to just enjoy these “it’s really happening” moments as they come because they are awesome. Really awesome.

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